Monday, 9 June 2008

Eternal sunset.

This is a poem I wrote when I was in Class X. It was after a bout of euphoria which was followed by a nasty sinking feeling in stomach, possibly the beginnings of the stones-in-gall-bladder, possibly the awful periodic depression we all face, now and then.


Eternal sunset, orange and red-
The colourless life, a colourful head.
So many sparkling rainbow-like dreams.

Exquisite gardens of blossoming flowers-
Grown over centuries, dead in an hour.
A flickering firefly gleams.

Twilight approaching, sunset shall go-
All of eternity in a singular flow,
The gloaming heralds a darker age.

Darkness forever in the fairyland-
Castles built in the pristine white sand,
Broken and shattered in a fit of rage.

Castles in sand, castles in air-
Illusion here yet delusion there!
How words do change....

Eternal sunshine, orange and red-
Beautiful flowers destined to be dead
Of what variety and range.

4 comments:

Baudolino said...

tam eva viditvaa atim.rtyum eti
naanyaH panthaa vidyate'yanaaya

Knowing him, we transcend death
There is no other path to peace.

A just reply. Or an unjust one.

What's In A Name ? said...

The 2nd stanza takes the cake.

ray said...

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fyn scarlet reed said...

Spotless minds, onek ghoshey-mejey.